EBF5 trailer done! (minus a few mistakes I’ll fix later)

Here’s the trailer for EBF5 that I’m working on!
I’m planning to have the narration voiced and to tidy things up a bit.
What do you think? Did I miss out anything important?

Hey guys! Epic Battle Fantasy 5 is ready to be publicly beta tested! BUT I need to have the Steam store page finished before then (so that people can start wish-listing it and all that).

This means it’s time for me to put together the game trailer. I’m gonna go with something very similar to EBF4’s trailer (shown below), so I’ll need to record some footage, write a silly script, and have someone read it out for me.
If you or anyone you know might be interested in doing the trailer narration in the next week or two, send me some samples of your work and a quote please.

Josh Tomar did the voice in the EBF4 trailer, and I’m happy with how it turned out. Figured I’d give others a chance before asking him again.

Well, the first minute of it, anyway.

Here’s the cover art for EBF5, to be used on the title screen and in promo images!
I’m very happy with the characters and text, but I don’t know if I like the sword in the background the way it is now. Guess I better finish off that Steam store page now.

What do you think?
Here’s a version you can use as a wallpaper: